Hello all! I am applying to the portfolio review this semester. Tonight's the peer review, and I want to fix up a few things before then (some things need to be re-scanned, lighting on the Maya project needs to be fixed, and I still have some figures to go over), but here's what I have so far. There are purposely more pages of figure drawing than I'm planning on having in the end.
Critiques are more than welcome, tear it apart!
Front page: Increase size of text. You've probably heard this a thousand time already, though.
ReplyDeleteDraft8: Figure on far left is kicking another figure in the chin. Try moving her a little to the left?
Draft10: Move figure on far left a little up and to the left. Then you can slide the next figure over right under her arm. I think the composition of the page would flow a little better that way.
Draft13: Far left tree is a little too close to middle tree. It can be moved a little up and to the left.
I only have design crits because THERE IS NOTHING ELSE FOR ME TO CRIT. Nice work~